Ben Parker - Pearl Dreams

[BenParker]

Got a new track that's called Pearl Dreams that I hope will be signed (fingers crossed) when I finish it completly in the next few days. In the meantime, would love to hear your thoughts on it. Head over to MySpace to check it out as it's streamed there! -> MySpace.com - Ben Parker Productions - UK - Trance / Electronica - www.myspace.com/benparkerproductions

 

[xruntime]

Sounds nice, but tbh it lacks that "refined" sound that most productions have....it could use some other drum track element, like a bassline.

Too dreamy for my taste...if it were me I'd add some darker elements to it...but I'm guessing that making it dreamy was your objective, looking at the title

 

[BenParker]

Yeah I know what you mean regarding the refined sound. Seems to be my problem, I don't really know how to make it better tbh.

Do you think that producing in Ableton would help?

And yeah, I went for the dreamy feel because I thought the melody suited it.

Thanks for the feedback though.